On Enemy Soil by Jim Murphy

On Enemy Soil by Jim Murphy


  1. Bibliography
Murphy, Jim. On Enemy Soil: the Journal of James Edmond Pease: a Civil War Union
Soldier. Scholastic, 2012. ISBN 0545398878.


  1. Plot Summary
This is the personal journal belonging to sixteen year old James Edmond Pease. Pease is a
soldier fighting on the northern side of the American Civil War. With hard work and
determination, and a bit of good luck, Pease works his way up in the ranks in his company.
This story follows Pease’ journey through a bloody war fought on farms and in family’s
backyards. Although James Pease is a fictional character, his experiences are based off
of those that many soldiers faced during this bloody time in history. 


  1. Critical Analysis
As the story begins, the reader can derive from the lack of proper grammar that
Pease is not a very learned man. However with Pease writing the was he talks, the
style adds voice to the story. For example, when Pease is discussing the opposing
side he states, “They was the enemy…” (Pg. 12). Another example can be seen on
page 83, …”men was not so lucky when their wagon overturned.” 
The reader can see Pease grow up through the experiences he faces. Although he
is still quite young, in fact he is technically not old enough to be apart of the army,
Pease is forced to experience tremendous anguish through death and survival. 
This story reads almost like a fictional piece due to the dialogue and interesting
characters thrown throughout the story. My favorite character in this story was
that of Sally, an older slave woman who risks everything to help James hide from
the confederate soldiers. She is nurturing and provides for James, as a mother-like
figure; something James knows nothing about, as his own mother passed away when
he was very young. 
I enjoy reading stories such as these. I enjoy being able to grow close with the
character and experience what the character is experiencing. Feel as the character
feels. It provides for an intimate look into the character’s world.


  1. Review Excerpts
  • “In a journal that evolves in detail and eloquence as Peace matures,
Pease’s unassuming personality keeps him a vivid, accessible narrator throughout.”
Booklist
  • “James’ account captures the tedium and drudgery of day-to-day life in the
infantry, the confusion and terror of battle. Murphy bases this [fictional] journal
on real diaries of actual Civil War soldiers. A solid addition to a popular series.”
—School Library Journal


  1. Connections
  • Pair this story with a lesson of the Civil War.
  • Because this story is geared more towards boys, try letting the girls in class read When Will This Cruel War Be Over?: The Civil War Diary of Emma Simpson, Gordonsville, Virginia, 1864 By: Barry Denenberg. This story is still a journal written during the Civil War, however this story is in the perspective of a girl, which the girls in the class might be able to relate to more.

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